informative speech

Hello I have an informative speech due Thursday morning.  I ahve written an outline but it needs some inporvement according to the instructor. 

“It looks like you did a pretty good job on the worksheet in terms of picking a topic area. Telling the audience how to play Texas Hold’em can be acceptable, however, keep your audience in mind. You need to make sure that everyone can find something in your speech that is useful, enlightening, etc. You’ll have to think about listeners who might not gamble–how can they benefit from your speech? You might consider expanding your topic (after I looked at the outline) to include one main point about the history/origins of the game and a second main point about the rules.”

 

I have attached myoutline and the instructions that need to be followed.  Please review these befor eresponding so I know you can complete the task.