received in Milestone Two

Example: Final Project

The following essay is what a student submitted for her Final Project. While she improved the essay in some ways, she did not improve it in other ways. In some areas, she thought carefully about the feedback she received in Milestone Two; in other areas, it appears she did not address the feedback she received.

Click on each highlighted area below to learn more about what she did well and what she could have done differently to receive higher rubric marks. This assignment was graded as follows, according to the Final Project Guidelines and Grading Guide:

·         Introduction, Artworks: 7.92 of 7.92 points possible (100%)

·         Introduction, Argument/Idea: 7.92 of 7.92 points possible (100%)

·         Historical Background, Relationship: 7.92 out of 7.92 points possible (100%)

·         Historical Background, Influence/Shape: 7.92 of 7.92 points possible (100%)

·         Similarities/Differences, Similar: 6.73 of 7.92 points possible (85%)

·         Similarities/Differences, Different: 6.73 of 7.92 points possible (85%)

·         Similarities/Differences, Express: 6.73 of 7.92 points possible (85%)

·         Similarities/Differences, Represent: 7.92 of 7.92 points possible (75%)

·         Modern Influence, Expression: 3.96 of 3.96 points possible (100%)

·         Modern Influence, Influence or Define: 7.92 of 7.92 points possible (100%)

·         Modern Influence, Learn: 4.5 of 6 points possible (75%)

·         Modern Influence, Echo: 3.96 of 3.96 points possible (100%)

·         Modern Influence, Archeytpe: 3.37 of 3.96 points possible (85%)

·         Modern Influence, Parallels: 3.37 of 3.96 points possible (75%)

·         Conclusion: 3.96 of 3.96 (100%)

·         Articulation of Response: 4.96 out of 4.96 points possible (100%)

 

·         Total Points: 86.64 of 100 points possible for a B+ submission