THIS IS THE FEEDBACK FROM THE TEACHER

What are three key ideas that you will discuss in support of your thesis?

a. Phoenix’s old age effect on her communication ability.

b. Effects of old age on phoenix’s way of perceiving issues.

c. Phoenix’s trauma about the health of her grandson who was ailing at home.

 Identify Three Key Ideas in Support of Your Thesis

Below Expectations – Identifies fewer than three key ideas in support of the thesis; however, the supporting points summarize the plot rather than reflect a critical reading of the primary text(s). The key ideas are significantly underdeveloped.

THIS IS THE FEEDBACK FROM THE TEACHER.

What are three key ideas that you will discuss in support of your thesis?

a. Phoenix’s old age effect on her communication ability.

b. Effects of old age on phoenix’s way of perceiving issues.

c. Phoenix’s trauma about the health of her grandson who was ailing at home.

 Identify Three Key Ideas in Support of Your Thesis

Below Expectations – Identifies fewer than three key ideas in support of the thesis; however, the supporting points summarize the plot rather than reflect a critical reading of the primary text(s). The key ideas are significantly underdeveloped.

THIS IS THE FEEDBACK FROM THE TEACHER.

What are three key ideas that you will discuss in support of your thesis?

a. Phoenix’s old age effect on her communication ability.

b. Effects of old age on phoenix’s way of perceiving issues.

c. Phoenix’s trauma about the health of her grandson who was ailing at home.

 Identify Three Key Ideas in Support of Your Thesis

Below Expectations – Identifies fewer than three key ideas in support of the thesis; however, the supporting points summarize the plot rather than reflect a critical reading of the primary text(s). The key ideas are significantly underdeveloped.

THIS IS THE FEEDBACK FROM THE TEACHER.